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My new fanfic [Aug. 20th, 2008|07:17 pm]
Mori x Honey




I did this little fanfic, of course it's Hunny x Mori  ^¨^ Hope you enjoy it even a little. All comments are more than appreciated!


Pairing and characters: HunnyxMori

Name: Silence doesn't answer all questions

made by: me aka umae also known as punatulkku

comment: as you all know the characters are Hatori Biscos. I wrote the story, so credits from it to me. It's not the best there is, far from it but I tried. There's too little of HunnyxMori love, so guess I need to spread the love myself. And as said before, please comment.

Oh, and my inspiration was: Mori x Honey - All the things he said: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XI1v7grSsYQ  and   Candyman : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_y-P6E25op8


Silence doesn't answer all questions


Hunny laid down on his bed, staring at the roof. Sighs kept

coming from his mouth and at times to times he angrily threw his

pillow on the wall. Once again he stood up and walked to get the

pillow. "This doesn't help at all" he said to himself and sighed.

He rubbed his eyes and laughed a little "Gosh my eyes must be

incredible red. Not cute at all". It was morning, Hunny's night

wasn't the best one there is. He had stayed up most of the night

thinking what happened yesterday. "Normally answers are easy. Why

isn't this easy? Wouldn't it be better if Mori was a number? 4 maybe?"

He knew his own ridiculousness and shook his head. No it wouldn't be

better at all. He's Mori and no one else. And it's good so.


Mori was sitting in his room thinking what went wrong. Yesterday

Hunny had run off from him after they had spent their day together

under the cherry trees. He left so mad that he didn't even dare

to chase him. As a side note from the bunny in Hunnys arms

that made Hunny even more angry. "AAAAARGH" he said loud in his head

and let his head drop a little. Did he do something, say something..?

What could have it been that hurt Hunny... Yesterday was a normal day,



What happened yesterday....


"The trees are so beautiful, nee Takashi?" Hunny smiled hugging

Takashis arm. "Ah" said Mori. He looked somewhere far away trying to

calm his nerves while Hunny kept hugging him. Hunny looked at him

hoping that maybe Mori would turn and look at him. They stayed like

that for a long time, but then Hunnys cake tooth started to echo

and he took the cakes and other sweets away from the basket.

He decided that strawberry cake would be a great start. "Takashi

would you like some cake?" Hunny asked smiling his sweetest smile.

"That smile's enough sweetness for me" Mori thought and shook his head

eagerly. Too eagerly if you ask Hunny. Hunny smile faded away and he

turned to eat his cake. Mori kept looking at the cakes, forcing his

eyes away from Hunny. Hunny thought that maybe Mori did want to have

some cake, though he didn't say so, and took a bite to his fork, put

his fingers on Moris lips forcing them to open and made Mori eat the

piece of cake. Hunny smiled and was just about to laugh when he saw

Moris expression. Mori looked angry though in fact he was puzzled.

That final touch had awakened Moris urge to kiss, to touch Hunny

into a complete fire, but he thought that this was neither the time

nor the place for sweet loving (oh how wrong he was). Hunny got a

little scared, why hadn't Takashi liked the cake? He apologized

immediately and hugged Mori. That wasn't very nice for Moris desire

but being a very capable kendo champion, he restrained himself. What

Hunny understood was that his touch wasn't wanted, for it was true

that in that moment Mori was very stiff and uncomfortable. That was

new for Hunny. Once again he wondered "What's wrong? Takashi likes me,

nee? Why doesn't he want me to hug me?". Mori not knowing that Hunny

felt his stiffness hit Hunnys back like an uncle saying "Now,now, it

was nice meeting you again, yes yes. Get over it". Hunny let go off

him and decided that no thing's more comforting than cake.


After the strawberry cake Hunny felt much better. He laid on the grass

looking at the clouds."Takashi, Takashi, come here! It's so nice lying

on the grass" Takashi not finding any excuse to decline moved next to

Hunny. They lied next to each other with their heads on the same

level. Hunny turned to look at Mori. "The clouds are moving so fast

today. I don't want to move at all. It's so beautiful right here."

He said. "Isn't it nice to run also? To leave this place in search

of something better." Mori looked up into the skies. "Don't you like

it here?" Hunny was still watching Mori. "It's better practising Kendo"

said Mori who was desperately thinking about the self-control he had

learned there. Hunny turned to watch the sky, he was worried. "Why

doesn't Mori like it here? He practises kendo alone. Doesn't he like

me? He likes me, right? He does like me!" Hunny sat up. This was heavy

stuff, but he didn't want to cry. A sigh came out of his mouth. Mori didn't

notice anything. He stood up, walked to Mori and sat on his chest. He

tried to be as attractive as possible. He bent his head very near to

Moris face. "What would you like to do now?" He asked. He put a little

grin on his face. "Practice Kendo" said Mori. And the grin was gone.

Hunny looked like he was going to beat the life outta Mori. Instead of

acting violent he stood up, looking really pissed, turned around and

walked away. After walking awhile very manly, he ran. "Away, away, away"

shouted his head.


Mori didn't quite get what had went wrong, maybe, he thought, Hunny had

guessed his thoughts and were grossed out. Maybe he should've eaten the

cake? Maybe the cake was made by Hunny? How could've he had known

that! Maybe Hunny had something important to tell him and he didn't

notice. Something must be wrong...! It was hard on Mori, no matter how

much he thought about it he always found new things after new things

and nothing seemed quite right. What made things worse was the idea of Hunny

not liking him any more which kept popping up in his thoughts. He hit the

wall hard enough to make Hunnys portrait fall down. As he picked it up

there was a knock on the door.


Hunny had decided to fix things. He needed to talk to Takashi. Not

all things can be understood without words. Not even between them.

"Takashi must be in his practice room" Hunny thought and decided to

go there. When he arrived there Mori wasn't around. A maid was cleaning

the floors. "Excuse me could you tell me where Takashi is?" maid

looked a little scared, she hadn't heard Hunny coming there. "Ah,

young master Haninozuka! Takashi-sama isn't here, he hasn't done his

morning practice today. He's still in his room" the maid smiled and

pointed to the left "That way" she said looking down, a little

embarrassed remembering that surely Hunny must know that. Hunny thanked

her and walked slowly to Moris room. He knocked the door and heard

Mori saying "Ah" as a 'come in'.


It was a tense moment. Hunny opened the door and Mori turned to look

who it was. A moment of silence before Mori gets his favourite word

out of his mouth: "Mitsukuni". Hunny stepped into the room and shut the

door behind him. "Takashi" he said sounding a little sad. He stood there

for a moment and started crying. That surprised Mori completely. "Ah, ah,

Mitsukuni... Mitsukuni. Mitsukuni! What's wrong?" He started to panic.

His sound shivery from all the tears he shout out "You don't like me

any more, nee? Nee? That's why you don't like me to touch you? You...you...

you don't like meeeeee!"Mori was confused for a second before he

realized that he truly had been stiff and afraid of Hunnys touch. Hunny

must've noticed his stiffness. He walked to Hunny and hugged him. Hunny

looked up to Moris face letting go off crying. Mori kissed him, hugged

him tightly and kissed again. "I could never dislike you. Never. I'll

always love you. I've always loved and I always will!" Hunny hugged him

and kissed passionately. He pushed Mori down on the floor and lied on

Moris chest. "This is better than kendo, right?" he said. Mori sighed

his answer: "AH".



[User Picture]From: yaoiness_kokoro
2008-09-03 01:41 am (UTC)
Yeay for more MorixHoney!!!

But the format made it difficult to read. @_@ *dizzy*
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[User Picture]From: punatulkku
2008-09-04 04:28 pm (UTC)
Ya mean the big line spacing? It somehow got like that and I can't get it off *sniff* O-O" Did ya like it?
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[User Picture]From: yaoiness_kokoro
2008-09-05 08:40 pm (UTC)
It's more that everything's on one side rather than the spacing. As for whether I liked it, it's difficult to say because the format kind of put me in a bad mood so I probably didn't like it as much as I could have. That aside, the characters were a little OOC for me personally. But we might just have different opinions of their characterisations.
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[User Picture]From: punatulkku
2008-09-06 02:54 pm (UTC)
OH well sorry for that, that also happened somehow. I think it's okay, though.

Well I'm sad you didn't like it too much. With characters being OOC I think that when reading Ouran or any other work of fiction the characters seem very different in everyones heads (for one reads them having the burden of his own personality with him), so when someone writes fanfiction it will always be OOC because it's their view of them (no one can write like the actual author). That to be said I think that very few things are actually OOC. Oh, I do have noticed that I normally have quite a different opinion of them, so.
Anyway thank you for reading and commenting. *bows*
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From: (Anonymous)
2008-10-27 12:28 am (UTC)
I really liked this. It was very sweet, I love these two they are the reason I watch Ouran High. I wish it would have been longer, I'd like to see what happened next.
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[User Picture]From: punatulkku
2008-11-03 04:55 pm (UTC)
Thank You! <3 You really made my day. I love them too, I wish there'd be more of them. I wish it'd be offical that they love each other. Aaaargh, maybe there'd be an offical HunnyxMori sideplot ('d be great). ^¨^
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From: (Anonymous)
2009-08-01 04:00 pm (UTC)
Very cute :3
I love Honey and Mori, this was great :)
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From: (Anonymous)
2010-08-01 07:25 am (UTC)
;3 I've always, always, always loved Takashi and Mitsukini. They were my favorites. Right from the start. Reading fanfictions about them makes me love them even more.

And this was a really good fanfic. (:
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